Thursday, August 29, 2013

A Work of Fiction -Fourth and Final Segment

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July 2000

One week had passed since the dream about Priscilla. The other-worldliness of the dream itself was not as bothersome as the aftermath of feelings and emotions it generated. Most of my waking hours had been spent thinking about her and of our time together long ago.

All I knew about her since that time was that she graduated in 1968 from Randolph Macon College in Virginia. After high school she had married her sweetheart of several years,  the handsome and athletic Hunter Adams. The marriage was over in less than two years, after which Dr. Truley drove her up to Asheville and enrolled her at his mother’s Alma Mater.

During the summer of 1968, after her photograph and a brief write-up appeared in the local paper announcing her college graduation, news got back to town that she was among a large group of antiwar protesters who were arrested and jailed in Chicago at the National Democratic Convention.

Dr. Truley had flown to Chicago to get his daughter out of jail and bring her home.

Few people saw her the remainder of that year, and by the time I came home for Christmas she had left and her father didn’t know where she was, according to Annie Sue.

Mama said the gossip around town was that she was at the Woodstock Music Festival in 1969, where she had met and married a second rate musician and moved to California.

But over time, the gossip mill about Priscilla almost dried up. Dr. Truley died in the mid-1970s, and the behavior and values of a younger generation lessened the shock value of Priscilla's former behavior. The Age of Aquarius seemed to have fully arrived in the sleepy little town.


I moved to Atlanta after college to accepted a job as a reporter for the Atlanta Herald and my visits to my hometown became less frequent as I became absorbed in my new life. My grandparents died two months apart, during the winter of 1977. I drove away after the last item of business had been attended to and vowed I’d never return

I started working the telephone. I had cut my professional teeth on investigative journalism and knew how to find and work my sources. I called anyone and everyone in my hometown who might know of Priscilla’s whereabouts. I spent hours searching the Internet for some mention of her, knowing her last name would no longer be Truley, but hoping some nugget of information would turn up. Nothing did.

One of Mama’s old friends told me in one of the calls that so far as anyone knew, Annie Sue Brighton, the Truley’s longtime maid, was the only person Priscilla had stayed in touch with throughout the 1980s and 1990s. She said Annie Sue was in a nursing home and would be my best bet tracking down Priscilla.

Annie Sue.  How well I remembered that name! The little teas she prepared and brought out to the Summer House. Her loving care of Priscilla. The woman who took up the duty of raising Priscilla after Mrs. Mary Maycomb, the housekeeper, left.

I thought Annie Sue was Priscilla’s mother until I was about five years old. It made no difference to me that she had black skin and Priscilla’s was white. I saw her love and devotion and assumed that could be provided only by a mother, or a grandmother.

She must be close to 90 years old by now, I thought. Would she still be rational? Would it be worth my time to make the four-hour drive to see her? Would she even remember me?

I pondered the questions, and even asked myself why I was so obsessed in this quest to learn more about Priscilla’s whereabouts. I had a great life here in the city. I was the managing editor of a large metropolitan newspaper, lived in a luxurious condo in the heart of Buckhead, had a man in my life that I adored. My life was going quite well, thank you very much, so why was I trying to dig up bones from the past?

These questions I turned over in my mind for several days before I finally notified my newspaper staff I was taking a few days off to tend to personal business. I called Greg to say I wouldn’t be able to accompany him to the Arts Center fundraiser that night, that something had come up and I would be out of town for three or four days, that I loved him and would be in touch.

Then I packed a bag, dropped off my dog Penelope at the kennel, filled the BMW gas tank and headed west on I-20.


This is the final installment here on my blog of a story that's whirling around in my head. I hope you have enjoyed reading it, and if so, leave me a note to tell me what you like, or don't like, about it.

As you know, first drafts are only the beginning. Much will change and much more will be written before the story is completed.

Will it become my first novel? Who knows? It all depends on where my search for Priscilla Truley leads me!!


  1. What??? Oh no, I want to know more. Does she find Pricilla? What brought on the dream or the sudden urge to follow this trail? I guess I'll just have to wait for the book :-)


    1. I want to know more, too; working on it! What brought on the dream is to remain a mystery for a while yet. Can't tell you yet if she finds Priscilla. I believe she'll HAVE to find her to bring all this to a satisfactory conclusion.

  2. I wanted to read it all before commenting.
    This story seems so real and exciting. First, I thought that you are writing about yourself, a long kept secret.
    What puzzles me, is - that what is " your age " here if Pricilla is in her 90´s? Maybe I missed that part.
    I´d wish to read the whole " book ". The writing is fluent and easy to follow.
    Thank you for sharing this with us : )

    1. I tried to write it in the manner of the way books I like are written. To be clear, it's Annie Sue (Priscilla's maid) who is now (2000) 90 years old.

      Priscilla was born in 1944. Her friend, the "narrator" or the "I" (unnamed as of yet) was born in 1946.

      Also, I have not yet given a name to the town. Has to be right; haven't got it just yet!

  3. Can't wait for more! Can't wait to see what Annie Sure remembers, if anything.

    1. Annie Sue is definitely going to be a key to helping the narrator solve the mystery of "where is Priscilla and what is she doing."

      Also to be resolved: Is this quest to find her worth the price being paid? Why would she even want to find Priscilla because I think I said in one segment that the narrator was mad and "stormed out of the Summer House" and that was the end of the friendship.

      We'll have to see where all of this goes.

  4. Dear Sanda - have just ready all 4 parts - now supper will be late this evening!!!
    Gripping story, wondering what the outcome will be. Hurry up with the next instalment please.

  5. Thanks Rosemary and what fun it is to allow my imagination run on and on. Working, working!

  6. Dear Sanda, this has the makings of a great novel. I do hope you keep going and work it up into a full-length story, not to mention revealing Priscilla's story, and the narrator's life too. You touch on many aspects of social history, leaving me wanting more!


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